chapters
Chapter one
In the holiday’s my family is going to the hill’s and we are going to corsair, menu though.then we MIT go for a swim together. When we go we will have a pink and
the pink will be fun and we can have a fun time together.
But I am going to Julia’s on the 12 of October and we will have a great time together. We will have fun at Julia’s
house on Thursday at ten o'clock pm right at the dot at Julia’s
House.
Chapter two.
At Julia's house we will have a good time together, and we can have a play time together it was so fun at her house.
Chapter three.
On Gilmore girls me and mum watch Gilmore girls on Netflix at house, and we had so much fun together,and we like how they act like real people,and we sit in bed in the morning, and we have a lot of fun together in the morning.
Me and mum love watching Gilmore girls
When we watch Gilmore girls,and we will have a great time together, and we had fun together,we had so much fun together, and we had Pocono and boxes together,and we had too much fun.
Hi Ellenor, Thanks for sharing your writing. It is interesting that you grouped ideas together and made them a chapter. It might be a good idea to look at layout before you publish. Looking forward to chapter four
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